The revision process can be extremely daunting. Taking a systematic approach can help make it less so. Today, I’m going to give an overview of an effective self-editing method, which consists of three phases: structure, scene, and style.
Phase 1: Story Structure
Tackling the structural phase of self-editing is undoubtedly challenging, but it’s also where you’ll see your story transform and strengthen. It’s all about taking a critical look at the backbone of your story—ensuring it stands firm and grips the reader’s attention. Reflect on how your narrative fits together. Is it cohesive, compelling, and logically structured?
How well does your story adhere to its framework? Nobody buys clothes that hang off a mannequin with no style, no intention. In the same way, readers are not going to stay with a story that seems more thrown together than constructed.
The questions you’ll want to address during this phase include: Can you identify the inciting incident? Can you identify the climax? Is the ending satisfying?
Phase 2: Scene Strengthening
With a solid story structure in place, shift your focus to the nitty-gritty of each scene. Every scene should be like a short story, complete with a beginning, middle, and end that adds depth and dimension to the overall narrative. Dive into the details: How do your scenes unfold? Are they driving your story forward effectively?
The questions you’ll want to address during this phase include: Is the POV clear? Does the POV character clearly have a scene goal? Does this scene move them toward or away from that goal? Does the scene pace match the scene purpose?
Phase 3: Style Enhancement
Now, give your prose a final polish. Examine each paragraph, each line. Tune into the voices of your characters and let your own unique voice shine as well. Remember, this isn’t about technical perfection but about bringing out the essence of your narrative and the uniqueness of your characters’ voices.
Don’t focus on grammar or correctness during this phase—there are software and editors for that. Instead, focus on your storytelling voice and the voices of your characters.
The questions you’ll want to address during this phase include: Do my characters each have a distinct voice? Are the sentences varied in their structure? Is it a smooth reading experience or too clunky?
That’s it for part two!
In the next post, I’ll go more in-depth into the structure phase of this self-editing method.
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